Feedback

This is the last poem that I will post on this blog. Thank you for reading. I hope that you enjoyed a look in to my life….
I can’t even get feedback

My closest friends must think I’m whack

My writing skills must be the worst

I’ve never improved past a high school level

I drop my thoughts on the homeboys

They say they’ll get right back

Then change subject

Or I never hear back

Is my ‘art’ really that bad

Or is nobody into things like that

All I’m asking for is some honesty

I’m a big boy

I can take some criticism

So please don’t hold back

Maybe its the sobriety

It must have something to do with the fact

That I can’t get any 

Let alone honest feedback.
The Poet Q

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